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Feedback/Revisions

I will add variety to the photos in my article, according the feedback they were all very similar. Therefore it would be in my best interest to schedule more photo shoots. For my table of contents I plan on removing the photo from the background so the text  can be seen clearer and to cut costs. In addition I plan on better coordinating what actually appears on our table of contents to be more cohesive.  on the cover page I plan adding more text so the space is more filled. We are considering changing the name of the magazine from Sota Sports to Soflo sports (South Florida) due to the fact that it will widen our target audience and make our magazine more realistic.

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